I have a big favour to ask everyone reading this. You may have seen that I've been creating 3D models and a few short animations of characters from different anime & games. Most of this is in preparation for a fairly ambitious project of mine - a 3D anime style episode (roughly 23 mins long) featuring these characters which starts off with them interacting with each other (to set up the story) and finishes in a battle, essentially it's comes down to a crossover fight.
For the past few months or so I've been creating the models, made a storyboard (only still images in blender, since I'm not too good at drawing ), made a script and now I've pretty much set up all the scenes, shots, camera angles, basic movements, etc. and created a very rough animation of what it would all resemble (very rough as in characters floating instead of walking, objects passing through each other, simple spheres for explosions and special effects, etc).
However, since I have practically no experience in script writing, or creating a story for that matter, I ask if anyone who's reading this journal could possibly watch my animation and give some feedback... please comment saying that you can and I'll send you a link to it! I'd rather not submit it since the animation looks pretty damn awful For feedback I'm mostly interested in the overall story and how well I've portrayed the characters, in appearance and dialogue (only subtitles with no lipsyncing) but any kind of feedback big or small would be very helpful. Also I don't mind if you only know a few of the characters (Sasuke, Sephiroth, Black rock shooter, Miku, Dante) or even none at all. The animation looks really bad but I want to make sure I've got all the correct dialogue and scenes first before I start actually animating, since I don't want to have to change a huge section later on. So anyone who's interested, please respond!!